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rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | October 28th, 2006 at 06:08pm Maybe things will be better
Let me know by a letter
Address it to heaven cuz that’s where I’ll be
I hope you’ll be alright I’m down on my knees
Maybe hearts will be mended
When my own heart is ended
I hope that the blood doesn’t stain the rug
I wish I could give you one final hug
Nothing can stop me
I’ve made up my mind
This heart is so shotty
I’m about to unwind
Please o please o please o please carry on
When my body dies my soul will live on
Maybe they will stop crying
I put an end to my lying
I can’t hurt anyone ever again
Death’s not an enemy it’s a dear friend
Nothing can stop me
I’ve made up my mind
This heart is so shotty
I’m about to unwind
Please o please o please o please carry on
When my body dies my soul will live on
I’m so afraid of being judged
I could use a gentle nudge
I need to go through with this
But I need one last kiss
So I grab a photo of you
And then do something long over due
I’m gone |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | October 28th, 2006 at 08:55pm anyone have an opinion |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | October 29th, 2006 at 06:42am Only thing that annoys me is 'cuz'. It's-not-a-word. Don't-use-it.
Awesome, very sweet.  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | October 29th, 2006 at 08:06am Ginger Nuts:Only thing that annoys me is 'cuz'. It's-not-a-word. Don't-use-it.
Awesome, very sweet.
thank you
but just for the record, what should i use |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | October 29th, 2006 at 10:26am Use because.  'Cuz' is just a quick way of spelling 'cause' which is part of 'because'. Even if you're pronouncing it that way in a song doesn't mean you have to spell it like that.
Sorry. I'm just being picky. I'm a grammar whore. |
Never_4get_Chickenman
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Gender: -
Posts: 17 | October 29th, 2006 at 12:29pm Ginger Nuts:Only thing that annoys me is 'cuz'. It's-not-a-word. Don't-use-it.
Awesome, very sweet.
hey dude this is poetry
there are no rules in poetry, you can use whatever words (or not words) you want
it shouldnt matter
but anyway i like it
keep writing : ) |
tomamazon
GSBitch
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 68084
  | October 29th, 2006 at 12:35pm Never_4get_Chickenman:Ginger Nuts:Only thing that annoys me is 'cuz'. It's-not-a-word. Don't-use-it.
Awesome, very sweet.
hey dude this is poetry
there are no rules in poetry, you can use whatever words (or not words) you want
keep writing : )
Yeah, but no.
whats the point in writing a poem when you don't use proper words?
I'm not having a dig @ Clark {ISTHATYOURNAME?}
...anyway, I loved it. |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | October 29th, 2006 at 05:23pm She Wants To Be GSB:Never_4get_Chickenman:Ginger Nuts:Only thing that annoys me is 'cuz'. It's-not-a-word. Don't-use-it.
Awesome, very sweet.
hey dude this is poetry
there are no rules in poetry, you can use whatever words (or not words) you want
keep writing : )
Yeah, but no.
whats the point in writing a poem when you don't use proper words?
I'm not having a dig @ Clark {ISTHATYOURNAME?}
...anyway, I loved it.
thank you very much
sorry bout the cuz |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | October 30th, 2006 at 10:52am rage;love;clark:sorry bout the cuz
Hey, it doesn't matter. I didn't to cause a mass debate. It's not a huge deal, I'm just picky. |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2844 | October 31st, 2006 at 01:06pm i like it! |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 494 | October 31st, 2006 at 10:06pm dance to this beatxx:i like it!
thank you very much |
