The Evil Can't Always Be Told
| Author | Message |
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| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 |  You crush me onto the bed And rest your limps above my chest Your novacaine kiss tastes like a chemical burn From lips bruised from praying for nothing 'For the saviour you claim to be, I've never seen your lips form a prayer But then again, they always lie And I always believe the words you utter And in the blazing fire you're pressing unto me The nicotine of crimson tales is sinking, Numbing my legs until I stumble Once I'm down at your feet My tears don't seem to matter' They appear selfish, just like the embrace you admit And flow so much harder though, As you're squirming in my mind Which hardly loosens the sense of destruction Swept beneath subconscious whispers That I can call my instrument Upon my sweat-drenched sheets You'll make me believe you'll love me for good If I only can pretend I don't care if you do My wrists stiffen under your grip As you urge me to keep my eyes opened wide 'I don't mean to bend you, just to slowly break you. It's revenge, sweetheart, tasting sweet as divine souls. Don't shut your eyes now and see what I've become with you..' - An angel, my dearest, you're what you've always been You just stepped a little too far from Heaven And into my kingdom. |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | Just one thing; did you intend to put 'limps' in the first verse? I mished you.  Yaaaaaaay! snowcherry poetry! I love it. |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Ginger Nuts: I really intended to do so.  Thank you, my dear.  |
| Inari King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451  | *Dances* I’ve missed your poetry too. I love it. The flow, the wording, the metaphors. Everything is simply brilliant. I especially adore the line(s): “Your novocaine kiss tastes like a chemical burn, From lips bruised from praying for nothing”. |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Inari: Thank you, darling! |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | What's in a name?: Thanks, my dear, I'm glad you like it. |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | *makes strange mating call* Um, yeah, marry me?   As the others said, 'twas excellent. |
| °MorbidRose° Jackass Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 1723  | |
| snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | Sorry for replying after quite a long time...  Thank you so much, guys, I'm so glad you like it.  |
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