Heartache's Never Fun

AuthorMessage
Sarah.
King For A Couple Of Days
Sarah.
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4490
November 4th, 2006 at 04:47pm
So here's a little poem I wrote about a guy I love but he only sees me as a friend, he told me he wanted to date me but then changed his words around and says he just wants to be friends...
Feedback would be nice.


The jealousy, the pain,
I’ll never be the same.
I don’t think he sees,
Just how much my heart bleeds.
Not even a chance,
But maybe a second glance.
I feel so sick,
Because I’m not his pick.
The pain I feel on the inside,
Looks different from the pain on the outside.
I don’t want to have this feeling,
But it feels like it’s never leaving.
He made me feel like I was worth it,
I never realized what he said was bullshit.
Heartache’s never fun,
Especially when he’s the one.
rollerpig
GSBitch
rollerpig
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283
November 4th, 2006 at 06:36pm
Um it's okay a bit forced rhyming. Cheese
Register