SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
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Gender: Female
Posts: 3369 | November 27th, 2006 at 11:12am Today is your birthday we like you a lot
we hope you have a good time celebrating it your way
just remember that we care about you and want you to live
so use your head wisely and if it's bad don't give in! |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2451
 | November 27th, 2006 at 12:11pm That’s cute in a way. But that is also all it is.
Feels like something an average 10 year old would write.
Simplistic and banal are the best words to describe it.
Don’t take this negatively, I’m not picking on you,
but your song just isn’t anything special at all.
It’s just four rows that could have been on a birthday card
or even written on the cake. Not much of a song at all.
More a “congrats I wish you well” sort of message.
Yeah... |
