Protest the Hero. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 6048
November 27th, 2006 at 10:05pm
When are you coming home?
I've been waiting on my
front porch there for some time.
You always told me
You'd be standing
right beside me, always.
When I look
you're never there.
So I lay down some tears.
When are you coming home?
I've been waiting in my
bedroom with my eyes closed.
You always told me
You'd be standing right beside me, always.
But when I look, you're never there.
So I wake up in tears.
I like this just one thing, it sounds like it could do with another verse, as it sounds a little incomplete, but thats just my opinion
Protest the Hero. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 6048
December 5th, 2006 at 09:19pm
Skully.:
When are you coming home?
I've been waiting on my
front porch there for some time.
You always told me
You'd be standing
right beside me, always.
When I look
you're never there.
So I lay down some tears.
When are you coming home?
I've been waiting in my
bedroom with my eyes closed.
You always told me
You'd be standing right beside me, always.
But when I look, you're never there.
So I wake up in tears.
The songfile can be found here. http://myspace.com/oncomingband Look for Waiting. It's not me singing, but I did write the song.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
December 6th, 2006 at 02:32pm
TREisveryCOOL:
i really like it
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!:
Aw it's real good. I like it.
[Off Topic] You're from Peru, Illinois? Damn, I live near there. [/Off Topic]
Also, maybe you could make it a bit longer. It's a tad short. But that doesn't mean you have to. ^_^ Keep writing.
Protest the Hero. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 6048
January 15th, 2007 at 12:18am
Ponyboy.:
When are you coming home?
I've been waiting on my
front porch there for some time.
You always told me
You'd be standing
right beside me, always.
When I look
you're never there.
So I lay down some tears.
When are you coming home?
I've been waiting in my
bedroom with my eyes closed.
You always told me
You'd be standing right beside me, always.
But when I look, you're never there.
So I wake up in tears.
Here's a performance of me and the guitarist singing it.
just one thing, it sounds like it could do with another verse, as it sounds a little incomplete, but thats just my opinion
