I Miss Him

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*gd_punk*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
*gd_punk*
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 28
November 29th, 2006 at 07:13pm
Broken up,
I can't deny
but i still miss him.
I can never win,
i need to hide,
but i have no protection.
I miss him, I miss him.


It's not great, but you can post your comments and PM me if you have any questions. Smile
Dead End Girl
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Dead End Girl
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219
November 29th, 2006 at 07:16pm
It's really short
Really unoriginal
And kinda lame o__o;
I'm sorry.
But...chea'

Try using some metaphors.
Also, try building a flow.
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