The Road Ends Here

In the shadows of
the traveled pathway
lies
a lurking monster
waiting to strike
searching helplessly
or so we think
for it's next victim
to drag back
into the shadows
leaving them there
to die alone
without any hope
they're helpless
you're helpless
there's no one to save you
there's no one to help you
just like you feared
it's your worst nightmare
nobodies walking by
they're going another way
by the way
did I mention
there's no one to save you
there's no one to help you
you're all alone
just like you feared
you're all alone
there's no one to save you
there's no one to help you
you're alone




Tell me what you think. I don't care if you hate it. But tell me either way please. I won't get mad at you

Always proofread your poems. Travelled is spelled with two l’s

I don’t like it at all am afraid. The fact that it has no punctuation and isn’t divided into stanzas results in a very “stressed” form. Also it has no flow because of it. I find it way to repetitive as well. It’s just too simplistic when it comes to the choice words to be that repetitive.

Too avoid the “mistakes” you’ve mad with this poem and to improve I suggest you have a look at these tips

Whatever you decide to do, good luck writing!