Unknown Addiction

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razzledgirl
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razzledgirl
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 1491

Mibba
November 30th, 2006 at 08:23am
What is the unknown addiction?


Sick things cover the pages of life and death,

whats so facinating about rape and drugs?

What kind of mental disorder do we all have,

that makes us want to compulsivly read about it?


Things that ruin you the most emotionaly and physically,

And yet we still give in to it all in hope that 'it' won't happen to us.

The advertising is never ending around the globe,

What is this addiction that we all have,

That makes us give it a try and hope that we arn't pulled in?


Reality is that it probably won't go away.

We must pull through with courage to find truth,

We may slip and fall somtimes,

But we must get up and try again as life goes on.


I got a phone call today from someone i know,

They said someone died the other day from something unknown.

All i can say is "who's next?",

You with the courage?

Or them.


By Samantha M. Fuchser McKinstry

i know it sucks....wrote it at 3am back at my old dorm...
The Kill
Falling In Love With The Board
The Kill
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8449

Blog
November 30th, 2006 at 10:43am
This was really great. You're wording is sharp, and very effective. I love poems that really make you think about the world around you... And I like how you bolded certain words to really emphasize them and make them stand out Very Happy Awesome job Up
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