luv-you-billie-joe<3 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 17 | December 16th, 2006 at 01:35pm Is it love to see you when I close my eyes
To want you for me
To make me touch the sky
Am I fallin in love deeply?
For you i could pick your heart up of the sea
Drink a milion cup of tea*
Take down a star in the night
I would like you to hug me tight...
I could bring you roses from heaven,
Believe your voice of treason
Make me just one reason
To love you a little more each season
*(of my grand ma^^)
Sorry for mistakes  |
FINGER_FUDGE Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 23 | December 18th, 2006 at 11:15am Aww..that made me feel all warm and gooey  Good job. |
Kristmas_Tsanne Great Success!
 Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 59161
 | December 18th, 2006 at 11:54am Aw 
I loved it |
EyesParalyzed Geek
 Age: 104 Gender: Female Posts: 242 | December 18th, 2006 at 12:39pm wonderful ! |
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| December 18th, 2006 at 12:40pm What's in a name?:
#1 A reply must contain some kind of feedback.*
It doesn’t have to be constructive criticism but you must tell why you
like/dislike the poem and/or what you like/dislike about it. **(Otherwise no
poet can improve).
Oh and your rhyming is really forced.
Not every poem has to rhyme. |
luv-you-billie-joe<3 Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 17 | December 19th, 2006 at 01:24pm ty* everyone^^  |
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278
 | December 19th, 2006 at 01:29pm luv-you-billie-joe<3:ty* everyone^^ 
This is seriously off-topic, but your avatar is so so so so so damn awesome. It's cute and awesome. |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| December 19th, 2006 at 02:25pm lyrical_gaah52:luv-you-billie-joe<3:ty* everyone^^ 
This is seriously off-topic, but your avatar is so so so so so damn awesome. It's cute and awesome.
#9 (nah, it not that serious, just keep it in mind)
You could have said something about the poem and commented on the ava at the same time though ^_^ |