DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543
 | December 21st, 2006 at 09:14pm A song I made. I'm VERY pissed right now.
But that's besides the point.
It's so damned hot down here
I dont feel so well
The moment I stepped foot in here
my toung began to swell
And over time my anger, it slowly formed a shell
so becomes the ballad of the girl in hell.
The marching demons,
they just wail along
The skeleton opera
they only know one song
Their singing a curse,
a bed of peoples wrongs
Repeats over, and over, no matter just how long
It takes my spirit
and cuts it into shreds
it takes my soul
a coffin for a bed
you can believe me
or think that I'm screwed in the head
but oh I'm stuck here, a slave among the dead
A flame, a flame, oh a crying shame
A knife through the head,
well come join the devil's game!
He said "believe me, believe me, I always forgive."
But he decieved me, believe me
that god is talking shit
It takes my mind
and shoves it blender forth
It takes my blood
right out of my corpse
you can believe me
or think I've had too much to drink
But life, and death, there's here and there's the brink.
OH we, are here,
the misfits
the outcasts of worlds cruel ways
But oh he decieved me
believe me, believe me
I'll be here the rest of my days!
Comments? |
vickieonfire{b.s.c.}
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 100 | December 21st, 2006 at 09:19pm demon_girl_121:
A flame, a flame, oh a crying shame
I like that line. Although I sang it in quite an.... Odd way. I don't know. The whole thing's just really good. GSB is like a gang of good writers.
For the most part. You, being in the most part. |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2844 | December 23rd, 2006 at 09:23pm OH we, are here,
the misfits....<--i really like that line it stood out for some reason. i love your song its rad! |
Green_Parade
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 22 | December 23rd, 2006 at 09:29pm wooohoo!!!
i like it..
why are u mad though? |
DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543
| December 24th, 2006 at 01:35pm Thanks! I was mad cause A.) I was in school and B.) My dads a prick. |
