Melissa. Jackass
 Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 1260 | December 24th, 2006 at 04:05pm A star on a Christmas tree,
Is as beautiful as can be.
Shining so sharply,
Glowing so vibrant.
Strands of tinsil circle the tree,
Along with red & green lights,
To light up the night.
Ornaments decorate the tree,
Spheres,
Novilties,
Symbols of hope,
Whatever is on it,
Will make the tree as visible as a fire's smoke.
On the top is a beautiful angel,
With wings and a candle,
It's made of glass,
And shines like the moon.
Christmas trees are what makes a room glow.
Children stare in awe at them,
While the parents smile.
Presents are put under them,
By Santa Clause on Christmas,
To complete the tree's glow.
By: Me.  |
DudeO King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 2543
| December 24th, 2006 at 07:44pm I didnt like it much. I think that you used the word 'tree' to excessivly, and there wasnt much of a rhyme schene or plot behind it. Someof it was okay. Not a lot of it. |