[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | December 25th, 2006 at 07:52am an old one i found, sorry if it is a dud or whatever.
eyeliner,
sleeves,
and maybe correct hair,
feeling right with a pen in my hand.
the paper becomes graffitied with words of
my mind eventually,
not making enough sense
explains how im thinking.
funny this feeling,
it's always how i feel
without you by my side. |
josh_oliday23 Geek
 Age: 35 Gender: Male Posts: 267 | December 25th, 2006 at 02:06pm Sorry I didn't like it. It just felt like a bunch of words just thrown together. I mean i read it twice and i just don't get it. Oh and the limit is only 3 poems a day. next time read before posting please. merry christmas though  |