Wasted youth

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havingablast_greenday
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havingablast_greenday
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December 28th, 2006 at 04:31pm
This amazing. I'm a fan of deeper, darker poems like this one. Great job. I like how you ended it, it was perfect. The dialogue was also placed in all of the right places and really effective. Great job.

Just wondering, do you have any more work on here? I would love to give them a read as well.
The Doctor.
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The Doctor.
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December 28th, 2006 at 04:56pm
i dont have anymore work on here,

but thanks Very Happy
that gave me the confidence boost i needed
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