Navy Blue.
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LongviewRocks Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie ![]() Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 16 | This poem isn't the most depressing, but it's not preppy. To make an analogy, it's not pink, but it's not black. It's more of a navy blue. Heh, that's a good one *changes subject name to Navy Blue* It doesn't really have a title. I wrote it when I was literally about to go to sleep (I was in my bed, using a flashlight in the dark). It seems that my brain only really starts working when I'm half asleep. ![]() ![]() *drumroll* As I sat, curled up with a blanket The fingers of Winter caressed me they were gentle, yet powerfully strong I curled tighter, ignoring their protesting I stayed positioned there with nothing much to do so I let my idle mind wander and it steadily wandered to you Times of joy and times of sorrow rushed through my brain together Knowing that yesterday will be the same as tomorrow My hope had begun to weather I looked for you when I was out though I know you will not be there And I would've given anything just to see you Because seeing you anywhere was so rare You turned your back to me, though made me more miserable than before I had looked to your kind face for help and instead you shut the door As I still sit, curled up with a blanket Winter's fingers beckon me to their path No, I am mistaken, as the scythe appears beside me, the fingers that beckon are death. |
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home ![]() Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801 ![]() ![]() | It's interesting. It seemed kind of forced in places. I loved the first stanza, though! I think it's worded well. |
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