The Boy That Reminds Me Of Him

oozing with arrogance
he knows what I want
but I think he wants it more
a short gasp;
a shrill cry;
an awkward yet innocent stare;
have you ever looked beyond the blue?

blind with confusion
unanswered prayers
nothing goes to plan yet he's more than a dream
he's a cough;
a dazzle;
an unsure wink of the eye;
he's everything I've ever wanted
and everything I fear


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so i wrote this at like one in the morning the other night, completely spur of the moment. i just jotted it down and that's how it came out; complete rough draft, but i don't know... i kind of like it.

constructive criticism?

thats good! i wish i could write poetry...

... o_o

thanks.

urm... would it be really really annoying to ask for some comments? because i have, like, none, and i'd actually really like to know what other people think of my poem. i posted it for a reason, see...