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I’ve been waitin
Oh so patiently been waitin
I’m tryin
To get you to stop cryin
I can’t stop what you’re tryin to feel
I can’t begin to help you feel
It’s tough bein the one to dull the pain
Because you’re basically telling me to stop the rain

I tell you
Everything I feel
Everything that’s real
I show you
Nothin really matters
Back to the latter
Let’s slow down

I’ve been jumpin
Through hoops like they were nothing
I’ve been killing
And watching the blood spilling
I can hold your head in my hand
I’ve dealt with more than I can stand
I’ll greet you at the gates with a heart in a box
Pretend to be what I am not

I tell you
Everything I feel
Everything that’s real
I show you
Nothin really matters
Back to the latter
Let’s slow down

Wow. I really liked this, and I recognised with parts of it so personally.

'I’ll greet you at the gates with a heart in a box'.
^Has to be my favourite line. Okay, it was obviously influenced by Nirvana, but I thought as a phrase it was beautiful with 'I'll greet you at the gates'.

Awesome. Not too sure about the word 'basically' in the first verse though.

thank you vurry much

I especially liked the second verse. Also, the chorus was muy bueno.

I'd have to agree with Ellen about the word basically, though it may work when you're singing.

'Nothin really matters
Back to the latter'

^ I thought that was a really cool near rhyme.

thank you electrocore panda