I Can't Stop Dancing

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josh_oliday23
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josh_oliday23
Age: 35
Gender: Male
Posts: 267
January 11th, 2007 at 09:08pm
This is just a small poem I wrote. Sorry if you don't like the repetition in the end but it is just how I decided to do it.
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My feet are moving to the rhythm again,
Yet no one's beating on the drum
It speeds on faster through the air.
But I can't stop the rhythm now.......

Taking back all the things I've said,
won't get this beat out of my head.
Tears falling...
stars calling...
I can't stop what I've become.
All I can do now is run...

I can't stop dancing!
I'm...mo...ving...toward the light.
I can't stop dancing!
I...don't...think...that this is right.

My feet are moving to a different drum.
It won't stop even though I beg.
In my mind I stand my ground.
But here in life my feet move on.

Punishment is so cruel for me.
Now I just wish that I was free.
No ending...
Fate pending...
Keep dancing...
Entrancing...
All I can ask myself is why?
My spirit breaks down as I cry.

I can't stop dancing!
There...is...no...end in sight.
I can't stop dancing!
I...won't...leave...without a fight.
I can't stop dancing!!!
(There...is...no...end in sight.)
I can't stop dancing!!!
(I'm...mo...ving...toward the light.)
I can't stop dancing!!!
I can't stop dancing!!!
I can't stop dancing!!!
The...drum...is...done for the night........
DudeO
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DudeO
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Gender: Male
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Mibba
January 12th, 2007 at 04:51pm
Keep dancing...
Entrancing...

That part as amazing.

the rest was okay, I think that it is a bit repetitive, and the rhyme scheme is different- but i like it. good job! Smile
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