My Funeral

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Too Much Eyeliner Jackass Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297	January 12th, 2007 at 05:48pm The music plays softly at first, Floating wightlessly through the air Slowly, steadily, it gets louder I hear it, a scream of terror on my lips opening my eyes, I see nothing but the satin lining fo a coffin I try to move, try to scream Then I realize where I am, why I can't move I'm at my own funeral Going six feet underground *** Like it? I do. I wrote it on Dec 12, 2006.
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board Age: 87 Gender: Female Posts: 5844	January 13th, 2007 at 09:27pm Floating wightlessly through the air Did you mean weightlessly? (I'm a spelling obsessor... sorry) But it was... wow... I loved the ending. Absolutely loved it. Then I realize where I am, why I can't move I'm at my own funeral Going six feet underground Amazing ending.
Too Much Eyeliner Jackass Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 1297	January 13th, 2007 at 09:29pm >< Ohmaigosh I am too. I can't believe I spelled weightlessly wrong. >< Sorry 'bout that. Thanks. You really like it? Wow.

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