sailor spaikae!
Jackass
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 1047
  | January 13th, 2007 at 10:03pm Midnight sky, ebony dark, a canvas for heaven's great artists.
Speckled diamonds glitter passionately, inspiring the generations who create beneath them.
Glamourous beams of captivating moonlight ignite and illuminate her translucent wings.
She takes flight, gliding like gossamer on calm, spring blossom winds.
Curving gently her delicate silken sheets, stained with ink, a mastrerpiece amongst mediocre works.
Creativity flows through her beautiful mind, inspiring her movement as she dances through the night.
Simplicity is her greatest asset as she weaves her way through bracken nets, over streams of traquiliy.
Ignorant, blissfully so, she harbours no knowledge of the trauma and suffering encased inside the walls she skims over.
All she knows is her midnight passion;
The decadent dance of the night.
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Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | January 19th, 2007 at 02:41pm The only criticism I really have of this is that I think it would work better if you were to split the longest lines up and flow from one to another. The content is absolutely gorgeous, but writing a single sentence on one line can make it look a little messy. But the language you use never ceased to amaze me - you have such a beautiful writing style. |
