sailor spaikae!
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  | January 13th, 2007 at 10:10pm Ashes and embers fallen at your feet,
Power - adrenaline bleeding from your fingertips,
Plaigiarism, infecting the soul.
Look in the mirror, is it you or me?
Our tainted hearts and warped thoughts.
The intricate lies we maintain everyday,
We're partners in crime; two the same,
Honestly now, what's it like being me?
Blackened heart to match decayed eyes,
Rotting heart; innocence long taken,
A taste for pain - bittersweet revenge.
Tortured by jade green jealousy |
PaNcAkEs
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| January 16th, 2007 at 04:32am fantastic...i like it. i dont know, i think its sorta perfect  |
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King For A Couple Of Days
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| January 16th, 2007 at 10:32am Please, don’t post so many poems in one day. It crowds the board and people won’t read them all anyway because it’s just too many at a time.
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sailor spaikae!
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| January 16th, 2007 at 01:26pm Oooops! Sorry, I won't do it again -cringes- |
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King For A Couple Of Days
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| January 17th, 2007 at 08:00am Stargirl_x:Oooops! Sorry, I won't do it again -cringes-
It's ok . Heh, that's all I'm agsking. Thanks =] |
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Posts: 35 | January 17th, 2007 at 08:24am wow i like it |
Peter Petrelli
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Posts: 4161 | January 17th, 2007 at 11:38am What I love about your poetry is how you use physical imagery with colour, I think it really gives it emphasis. I loved how it had a steady, rolling beat but didn't rhyme - it made it really easy to read. |
