peas lover.
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 | January 14th, 2007 at 03:19pm Exposed in Her Divine Repose
Tantalized by a gaunt image of salvation,
A Countess – his famous whore
Kneels by the skeletal throne of lies
Where he reins – her draconian master.
Her awoken mind - infested with frustration
Coils in his gaze as faded lips word the epilogue – nevermore
And manacled wrists beg, but find no mercy in azure eyes
Veiled with secret of sin – his personal disaster.
Fighting a battle already lost but never begun,
She knows not why by his side she stays
For He shows no mercy nor provides the light
For the Countess – she mourns on stained bed-sheets, poisoned and hazed ‘till dusk
Where her storm-whipped body endures His touch – shackled ankles can not run
While the blood trickles slowly – on the bed of thorns she lays.
And above the raven-black hair bondaged angels render of the gory sight
Blind before two tangled bodies and love scented with sweat and musk.
A lithe body, verdant and fresh,
Exposed in its divine repose –
Her static silhouette glimmers, caught in the silver dust
Of moonlit features carved in ebony flesh
And carefully watched as satin sheets arose,
Stripping the innocent and flaming His lust.
Gore-flecked nightmares and vast walls
Wherein her phosphorent shadow rests condemned
Whispering of vengeful love hushed into hate – She whispers alone.
And Sin and Lust play their ancient roles
Unleashing celestial screams that from heaven decent
And land into the milky white throat of her figure forlorn.
I already know the flow is off at parts, but I couldn't get around it, other than that - tell me what you think. |
Too Much Eyeliner
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| January 15th, 2007 at 10:39am It's beautiful. The whole idea is nice, but you made it way better. Good Job.   |
peas lover.
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| January 16th, 2007 at 10:26am Thank you.  I'm glad someone actually chose to comment on it. |
sailor spaikae!
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 | January 16th, 2007 at 01:28pm I already read this on INO but it's still absolutely maazing. I never tire of reading your work Sara. |
peas lover.
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| January 17th, 2007 at 11:29am Nicki? Thanks. <33 |
Peter Petrelli
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Posts: 4161 | January 17th, 2007 at 11:36am I agree with Stargirl_x, I read this on INO and it's just as beautiful as the first time I read it.  |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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| January 20th, 2007 at 10:07pm i love the way you used your words....idk what i'm trying to say here....but it was an amazing poem. i loved it |
