Hiatus Of Life

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Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Garrett Hanlund
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801

Mibba Blog
January 15th, 2007 at 03:05am
This life seems like a movie,
mixed reviews fog the plot,
who's the star, me or you?
The cameras are rolling.

Viewers sit at home,
laugh because it's not them,
they sit so comfortably,
it sickens me.
Who has the remote?

Someone find me the director.
I have a problem with this script.
What is with these frequent cameos?
Who is he, and why is he in so many scenes?
Someone call for makeup.

The network finally calls,
ratings are down.
Cancellation is in order.
Wait a minute, I can't rewind...
Mrs. Lee
Jackass
Mrs. Lee
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Posts: 1428

Mibba
January 16th, 2007 at 10:20am
Simple but still good.
It's was interesting.
But it could of been in a better flow in some bits.
But I still liked it. :]
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
January 19th, 2007 at 02:39pm
I liked this too, it was very abstract - simply so, but effective none the less. I really loved the idea behind it; I think 'Someone find me the director. I have a problem with this script' were the most poignant lines in the entire piece.
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