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  | January 17th, 2007 at 11:29pm Sorry I've haven't been writing much. And here I bring you this new poem, which has taken me absolutely forever to write. It's really different to me, and if you know my other poems like I do, you'll see it, too. I'm not quite sure how I exactly feel about it. Let me know.
Bloody bandages can never attribute anything to vanity
you said I wear stars on my face and moonlights on my
dress. The night sky fills my hair, yet there is nothing
more ugly than that which filters my skin.
You could never utter the sentence. Never speak
such truth and wisdom beyond the calendar. Your eyes
always held ambiguous thoughts as they melted in the calm
air. Pearls did adorn your touch, but steeped within grew a mold
asphyxiated by rebellion. You know your rejection, but
still claim to hold an acceptance in society.
Hair strands frame your face- heart shaped. We knew that
they would never get passed the masquerade. Tears
dried in your hair as the societal outcry felt your suicide.
Who knew it would be for all the wrong reasons
Bloody bandages never did contribute to vanity
henceforth this darkened sky and myriad clouds
of gold. But dear-
you look horrible covered in diamonds and pills. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | January 18th, 2007 at 12:07pm I am so insanely jealous of your vocabulary.  The imagery you use is just... wow. |
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| January 20th, 2007 at 07:14pm Ginger Nuts:I am so insanely jealous of your vocabulary. The imagery you use is just... wow. Heh. I don't see why you're jealous of me... Your writing is better than mine. |
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King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3663 | January 20th, 2007 at 07:26pm oof i love that poem and also your vocabulary is brilliant =]
and i love the last line of it |
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| January 20th, 2007 at 09:18pm warning.:oof i love that poem and also your vocabulary is brilliant =]
and i love the last line of it Thank you much.  |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Gender: Female
Posts: 97
| January 20th, 2007 at 09:57pm fhahaiahf.....that's.....WONDERFUL! I love it. Your....vocabulary! Woah....i feel stupid now. o.O |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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| January 20th, 2007 at 09:58pm I love your imagery too ^.^ |
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Age: 38
Gender: Female
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| January 21st, 2007 at 07:12pm Aww. Thanks. Although my intention was never to make anyone feel stupid with my vocabulary. It's not really that large... But keep in mind that I'm an English major. I LIKE reading the dictionary. |
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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| February 9th, 2007 at 05:03pm you do......coolio.... |
