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C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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Mibba
January 19th, 2007 at 09:34pm
I won't talk about death
Nothing with a gun
I won't talk about a lonely girl
Who fell head over heels in love

It's too overrated, too over done
To write about cutting, to write about kisses
It's too simple and easy to write about love
Don't try to deny that you aren't apart of this

So writers put down your pens
Don't write about another lost love
Nothing with death and destruction
'Cause it's been over done

Your poems don't have to rhyme
Or have a catchy tune
It doesn't have to be dark
Your reward will come soon

Write about everything and nothing at once
Write about things that don't make much sense
Don't write about depression, or write about murder
Your poems could be joyful or filled with suspense

It's too overrated
Too overrated
To write about death
To write about love
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King For A Couple Of Days
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January 20th, 2007 at 07:50pm
oo i like it
it seems one of those poems im always trying to write
something thats not to do with anything
just something that comes to mind well done
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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Mibba
January 20th, 2007 at 08:26pm
Very Happy thank! I wrote it in my cooking class.....
TragicCaseofMyReality
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January 20th, 2007 at 08:40pm
i liked it alot! especially how the whole poem is a contradiction. great job!
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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Mibba
January 20th, 2007 at 08:43pm
Very Happy I feel specialful
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January 21st, 2007 at 10:15pm
The ''Your reward will come soon'' part, it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the poem but the rest is amazing, great job.
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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Mibba
January 22nd, 2007 at 04:15pm
tank you
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January 24th, 2007 at 09:19pm
lol Ieva:
The ''Your reward will come soon'' part, it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the poem but the rest is amazing, great job.


I agree. But all in all....it was an okay poem
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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Mibba
January 26th, 2007 at 12:20pm
thanks
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January 28th, 2007 at 11:46am
its well good Smile u shud become a professional poet Very Happy
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Mibba
January 29th, 2007 at 10:40pm
That's nice.
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
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Mibba
February 9th, 2007 at 05:00pm
emo princess:
its well good Smile u shud become a professional poet Very Happy


Woah....you like it that much?! Thanx!
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