The Crowd Pleaser.

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PhotoBoy. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 24	January 23rd, 2007 at 03:48pm Eyes bright and statements bold Loud steps; confidence behold Toothy grins mark sallow lips A huge smile for such fragile hips Swiftly passing the aching crowd Washing them with your dirty shroud Eager followers touch your hand Waiting for you to take your stand Chest out and rigid stance Ready to take your final chance Scream your beliefs from the podium Drown in your fans sweet opium Tainted pupils stare big and bold Loud laughter; mocking behold Toothy grins you tried to mend Honestly kid? For you it's the end
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	January 24th, 2007 at 02:59pm I wasn't entirely sure whether repeating 'toothy grins' worked. I don't think the connection between the two lines was strong enough, somehow. 'Chest out and rigid stance Ready to take your final chance Scream your beliefs from the podium Drown in your fans sweet opium'. ^Those lines were so powerful; so commanding, I loved that stanza especially. Someone's an Gerard Way fan.
lyrical_mess Falling In Love With The Board Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 5278	January 26th, 2007 at 02:25am I agree with GN. I liked that verse a lot. I also like "Toothy grins mark sallow lips/ A huge smile for such fragile hips

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