A Moment Of Me

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newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
newagecarny
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495

Mibba
January 26th, 2007 at 05:41pm
This clock runs faster,
so say beaten footsteps
as grass shapes scars.

Fists break jaws
but not words.

Motion of water,
a delicate sickness
of squeezing sorrow.

The earthquake of a
caged heart
I am no more.
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
C.j. Hardcore Pansy
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 97

Mibba
January 26th, 2007 at 06:55pm
love it!

The earthquake of a
caged heart
I am no more.

that was my favorite verse

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Faith
Addict
Faith
Age: 39
Gender: Female
Posts: 11507
January 26th, 2007 at 07:17pm
Motion of water,
a delicate sickness
of squeezing sorrow.


I love that Cheese "Squeezing sorrow" Molly
charmishgirl
Geek
charmishgirl
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 315

Mibba
January 26th, 2007 at 08:20pm
it's awesome
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King For A Couple Of Days
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Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921

Mibba
January 26th, 2007 at 08:48pm
Your poetry is way too good. Cheese

The way you put your words together is so... OMGyes
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
January 31st, 2007 at 03:02pm
Your imagery and abstraction is just to die for. Seriously. I can't break it apart to choose a favourite piece; it's one, individual work, and can't be split.
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