rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | January 29th, 2007 at 06:52pm The slow and steady win the race
The hare has fallen on his face
Again
The early bird gets the worm
Malchick kids’ll never learn
Again
To justify my notion I need a little more evidence
To amplify this motion I need a little more common sense
Dumb stiffs tell me how to live
I’ve got nothing left to give
It’s tough for me to viddy clear
When all my droogs don’t stay near
So tell me how I trust you
So tell me how I trust you
A penny saved a penny earned
Touch the stove I’ll bet you’ll burn
Again
I was blind I still can’t see
I’ll fall down eventually
Again
To justify my notion I need a little more evidence
To amplify this motion I need a little more common sense
Dumb stiffs tell me how to live
I’ve got nothing left to give
It’s tough for me to viddy clear
When all my droogs don’t stay near
So tell me how I trust you
So tell me how I trust you |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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 | January 29th, 2007 at 07:19pm That was brilliant. The flow was phenomenal and the rhymes weren't cliched or forced.
Liking the Clockwork Orange reference. The way you incorporated that was absolutely great.
Keep up the good work, sonny. :now this is where they should make a soluting smilie: |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | January 29th, 2007 at 07:39pm it's impossible not to love a clockwork orange
thank you vurry much |
