Ego

I know you have problems
But so do I.
Does that really give you
The right to lie?

A fib here and there
Isn't so painful.
But the way you act
Makes you seem disdainful.

You are not a "God"
And nor will you ever be.
I know I'm not perfect
But you obviously can't see.

All these people have left
But you're still here.
Although that doesn't bother you,
You're not sincere.

You couldn't care
A bit about them.
Nor do you care what I write
With the tip of my pen.

I'm expressing myself
And you're not hearing a word
So I'm going to leave you in your "glory"
Which is just the way you preferred.

i decline the world

Does that really have anything to do with my poem?

You are not a "God"
And nor will you ever be.
I know I'm not perfect
But you obviously can't see.

All these people have left
But you're still here.
Although that doesn't bother you,
You're not sincere.

I really like that bit.
I think your poem is simple.
But effective.
Don't know how I can tell you how to fix it.
Because I like it the way it is.

Keep writing.

Thank you. ^_^

I think it’s good. You have this nice flow that I like. Some rhymes were a bit so so but overall I liked it. The simplicity of the wording and structure really suited the tone of it. Nicely done

Thank you. =]

greenday_rox_u:

i decline the world

I don't know what your post has got to do with the topic. To me it seems to be spam.

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