Nightmares.xx
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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  | February 16th, 2007 at 08:53pm well here you go... its not very long, but i think i get my meaning across.
Jealsousy.
The gaint of darkness;
Making and breaking;
Trying to be different;
Never achieving enough;
Never quite as good;
Never perfect.
Always alone and always wanting,
Revenge.
A wish to kill;
A way to dream;
A desperation and a will;
Always perfect;
Too good to be true;
Always being what you want...
Why can't I be you?
Jealousy |
Tyler Durden
Jackass
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| February 16th, 2007 at 09:11pm i felt that you used Never too much, the best way ( i think ) that you described Jealousy was in your second to last statement. in future, you might want to use new words, try not to repeat too much.
not trying to be mean, just trying to help |
