Dear Daddy

Dear Daddy,
I thought
I saw you smiles today,
first time
in days.

Dear Daddy,
I though
you smiled at me,
first time
in weeks.

Dear Daddy,
I thought
you said you were proud of me,
first time
in months.

Dear Daddy,
I thought
wrong.

You need to go back and correct some of grammar and punctuation mistakes.

Your poem sounds very choppy, so you should also work on the form. Also try showing instead of telling. Describe how you though your father was smiling. Stuff of that sort.

Keep writing.

i think wait_what is right