Green for a Day
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 508
 | March 3rd, 2007 at 01:06pm We, the fans of Green Day, want the same thing
To wrap our arms around them
As they cry lyrics on the shoulder of a riff
We see their pain
We feel their pain
We see their joy
We love their joy
They write for us
We listen for them
They're the fathers of the music
And we're the children of their success
We represent their dreams and goals
We give them what they want through loyalty
They give us our lives in rhyme
We live and breathe through their creations
They live and breathe through our support
We are the fans of Green Day
And they sing the lives we live |
wait_what
Geek
Age: 38
Gender: Female
Posts: 411
 | March 3rd, 2007 at 05:03pm Words4Weapons:We, the fans of Green Day, want the same thing
To wrap our arms around them
As they cry lyrics on the shoulder of a riff
We see their pain
We feel their pain
We see their joy
We love their joy
They write for us
We listen for them
They're the fathers of the music
And we're the children of their success
We represent their dreams and goals
We give them what they want through loyalty
They give us our lives in rhyme
We live and breathe through their creations
They live and breathe through our support
We are the fans of Green Day
And they sing the lives we live
You have some interesting metaphors, but I'm not crazy about what it's about. I mean... yeah Green Day is cool and all, but I just don't know about a fan poem.
But that's probably just me. Post some more of your non-Green Day poetry sometime. You have potential. |
Green for a Day
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 508
| March 4th, 2007 at 08:53am Well, that's just what was on my mind, but I'll take your advice and save the Green Day fandom stuff for my blogs  |
