no wai, Mikey Wai!
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 6232 | March 19th, 2007 at 06:37pm Wanting to fall in love with the charm of the sharp, cool metal.
To feel the rush and calmness.
The release of pain, struggles, and worries.
Enjoying every second of this high.
Deeper, better, more you ask.
The response is exhilarating.
The consequences sink in
as the reality of this hopeless life
rushes at you like a linebacker.
Paranoia creeps in, hoping no one notices.
Sleeves pulled down long,
wrist bands covering your guilty pleasure.
You take a peek behind your sleeve to admire your work.
A smirk crosses your face and satisfaction fills your mind.
This alas, is not enough.
But it will do, until your next date with the blade.
okay, i know i need to work on the structure |
spill_no_sick
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 31
Gender: -
Posts: 8588 | March 19th, 2007 at 07:51pm have you ever been in this position?
when writing a poem, it's best to keep it poetic, and if it's just straightforward, make sure you know what you're talking about
because there are people who know more than you |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | March 19th, 2007 at 08:44pm it was good!!!!
*comment on my poems too!** |
