Paradise Found- On Rivers of Reality

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Servatis A Maleficum
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April 5th, 2007 at 11:22pm
Silence parts these frostbitten lips,
Streams of misty words begging to be uttered,
to claim life, to grab a tangent hold of some chaotic reality.
If they could flow freely, vibrant waterfalls teeming of serenity,
Then let them fall,
but could these miniscule letters form the slightest figment,
some foggy conclusion of the miracle called us?

This remniscent pen and transparent paper,
my humble attempt to portray this blazing wonder,
passively recall the echoes of today,
shards of elusive memories string themselves together,
as they dance in peaceful glory.

Dancing, on ice, but by firelight-
a masquerade of the polar opposites,
cascading perfect equanimity-
Melting away the sweetest decadence,
evaporating in divine unison, into the air,
into each other, to form only the softest of dreams,

where the slightest gaze leads to eternal intensity,
where lovers eyes are the deepest particles of thought-
an intricate ocean of endless passion,
where the iridescent shades of blue end only at the sky,

to become one, and above with the evanescent clouds,
such blissful afterthoughts of december rain,
they fall, delicately, around our gentle hold,
from the endless blue, these glowing petals of our inspired minds,

Reminisce of this, forever,
where we clung together in pure devotion,
where we found our own reality, and held onto it so dearly.
If we ever let go, returning to a nightmarish delusion,
could we find the path again,
and unveil our enlightment, in the others loving arms?

I'll hold on, if you could simply latch onto me,
we could drown in our sea of intricate emotion,
and we could dance the night away,

and you'll all hear us in the wind,
the scent of the breeze, flowing past the snowflakes of time.
you'll see us flying, across glassy waters,
our shadows gracefully entwined, through the broken reflections.
you'll feel us, eternally- an undying presence,
forever lighting the way of the world,
a hold unbreakable, for this is true passion.

And this shall be our love, our unwavering immortality...
Zoie
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April 6th, 2007 at 10:18am
I swear I've totally seen this poem before o_o
Servatis A Maleficum
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April 6th, 2007 at 10:21am
ORLY?


Don't tell a soul. =] I'm watching you, Zoey/Zoe/Zoie.

I know where you live. Laughing
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Mibba
April 8th, 2007 at 02:47pm
Zoie:
I swear I've totally seen this poem before o_o

Really? Where?
Servatis A Maleficum
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April 8th, 2007 at 03:02pm
I think I cleared this up, and a few people will be pleasantly suprised...or I'd like to think so.
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Mibba
April 9th, 2007 at 03:59pm
Servatis A Maleficum:
I think I cleared this up, and a few people will be pleasantly suprised...or I'd like to think so.
You did indeed. Well, I know I'm happy Very Happy
Peter Petrelli
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April 10th, 2007 at 05:41am
The few grammatical errors, mainly concerning capitalisation and punctuation, but otherwise I love it.

Seriously.

Everytime I read it I just love it more.

'Dancing, on ice, but by firelight-
a masquerade of the polar opposites'.
^Those lines were just incredible.
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