Destination_Unknown
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Posts: 105 | April 14th, 2007 at 05:38pm She was young,
so was he
He spotted her from across the room
She spotted him staring
They fell in love with a stare in the eyes
They were lost in the sea of feelings,
But they were blinded by empty love
Four years down the road,
He started to let go
She didn't want to
But he just wanted to let go
He went behind her back and went to her best friend.
She heard this from his best friend
This caused a feud
Her friend fell in Love,
To empty love.....
She was blinded by it....
After that, she was a victim of lost love
she felt sorrow
but she got up and became stronger
she moved on
She didn't want to put up with this
She was dumped with a single last rose
on Valentine's Day
But she knew this was coming
She was strong enough to walk up to him and give him a piece of her mind
He begged her to come back to him
But she already moved on
to someone who she knew wouldn't leave her.
She was in real Love, not empty love.....
She felt the difference. |
brompton cocktail.
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Posts: 983
 | April 14th, 2007 at 05:48pm Nice! |
Tyler Durden
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Posts: 1454
 | April 14th, 2007 at 09:04pm it has an Avril Lavigne-y feel to it.
i like it!
good job! *thumbs up* |
La Tua Cantante
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Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
| April 14th, 2007 at 10:49pm honestly.....
whats the ryme pattern
i dont see one.... |
PONED
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Posts: 257 | April 15th, 2007 at 01:54pm yeahh i dont see the rhyme pattern either....i got a little confuzed in the middle too.
i also didn't find a meaning in it.
what is Empty Love?
and how did it...blind...her?
but i still really like it.
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!! UR REALLY GOOD |
