Torture

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SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
SugarGreen
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Gender: Female
Posts: 3369
April 15th, 2007 at 05:30pm
Broken caress and still you whisper,
call my name as if you were Hitler
trying to get me
to wander into my doom...
You are not understanding how they torture you
They give you no space
call you a disgrace
damned if you don't or do
no way out
not a single idea how
to end this
other than to die
like no more than a fly
with the swatter going smack
just as quick as that
if you give in to pain- your loss
your life is chaos
and in the end they let you know
that it was all in your head

You feel the torture, want to cry
but if you do it's good bye
to the hospital you go
to become someone else's shadow
just to get out
if you give into pain- your loss
your life is chaos
and in the end they let you know
that it was all in your head
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Geek
PONED
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Gender: Female
Posts: 257
April 16th, 2007 at 08:50pm
rhyming was a little off but other than that it was very good
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
SugarGreen
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Gender: Female
Posts: 3369
April 16th, 2007 at 09:30pm
Thank you
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