steady riot
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842 | April 20th, 2007 at 06:56pm Okay, so, I pretty much write constantly. I write what I feel, I write what I know.
I don't really like to explain my work, but I will say that this is not about ending my life.
Comments and constructive criticism are welcome though. :]
Feet tapping
Music pounding
Voices yelling,
laughing.
Legs, arms
Turning
Spinning
Leaping
Stomping.
Muscles straining
Limbs stretching
Joints aching,
exhaustion.
Life in
Hours
Days
Months
Years.
Then why
Do I
Have
The
Feeling
I won’t miss it very much? |
SugarGreen
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 3369 | April 21st, 2007 at 12:36am I am not really sure how to respond to this one. It seems like the thing you won't miss is all the exercise or loud noise or life... I am very confused by this. |
steady riot
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842 | April 21st, 2007 at 09:16am Hmm. Looking at it again, no one would really get it if they didn't know me that well.
I'm trying to think of a title, the ones that I've got it down to would tell you what its about.
But until I title it, I'll tell you that I've been dancing for 12 years, and its about that. |
Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 87
Gender: Female
Posts: 5844
 | April 21st, 2007 at 09:28am I agree with Eternity Regnarok. I'm confused as to how to respond to this as well.
I'm liking it somewhat, but then again, I'm not.
I'm not sure how to tell you how to improve, so I guess.... Just work on it a little more, or something. |
