PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | April 24th, 2007 at 09:51pm Look Into Her Eyes And Tell Her She's Beautiful
Tell Her she's the only one you need
Tell Her that you will be there for her through it all
Tell her you'll watch over her
Tell Her that you only want her
To be with her and only her, forever
Swear to her heart that you will never leave, no matter what
Promise that you will be her guardian angel
Promise to never let her fall
Promise to catch her
Swear to never hurt her
Never break her heart
Because what you did to me, Love
Is not well deserved to anyone else
You made me suffer
Don't let your new love suffer
You abused me ,dear
She doesn't deserve to be abused
Be Her Guardian Angel
Look Into Her Eyes and Tell Her She's Beautiful |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | April 25th, 2007 at 03:54pm criticizm welcomed  |
La Tua Cantante
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
  | April 26th, 2007 at 07:26pm that was really good!
it flowed like a river instead chopy like waves!!! lol
its cool that your telling the ex boyfriend (??) what to do witht eh next girl...ots interesting....cause usually you dont find that too often....
You abused me ,dear
She doesn't deserve to be abused
Be Her Guardian Angel
Look Into Her Eyes and Tell Her She's Beautiful
i love the ending
great job! |
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808
| April 27th, 2007 at 02:11pm its so sweet, this way of writing suits you. |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | April 27th, 2007 at 07:01pm thank you so much! |
