So Damn Bored Falling In Love With The Board
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 8820 | April 28th, 2007 at 07:33pm Take me away
Locked inside myself
I want to run away
but I can´t
I wish I could see the light...
I wish I could see the path...
Only you could can bring me back
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Take me by the hand
I´ll take a deep breath
Take me out of here
I won´t feel any pain...
Take me away...
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So Damn Bored Falling In Love With The Board
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 8820 | April 28th, 2007 at 07:38pm It was originally written in an old diary.. (from a long long LONG, time ago....) and it used to make some sense then ; but now, it doesn´t feel right at all, so I´d like a little help to finish it or edit it in any way... |
PONED Geek
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 257 | April 28th, 2007 at 08:23pm hm. i can't think of anything as an ending.....
Anyway, it is great how it is.
Nice job!!!!!!!!! |
So Damn Bored Falling In Love With The Board
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 8820 | April 28th, 2007 at 08:43pm Thanks =P |
JOOLS Addict
Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 11676
| April 29th, 2007 at 12:38pm I dig the last half, but the first half lacks a little rhythm. Overall good job, though. It'd make a good song in my opinion. |
So Damn Bored Falling In Love With The Board
Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 8820 | April 30th, 2007 at 09:56pm I´ll try to fix it... =P |