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lyrical_mess
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Mibba Blog
April 29th, 2007 at 05:14pm
Festoon

Last city
I thought I could trust the repitition
The drifting I feel each morning and night
As with sleep came the sorrowful moans
Reminding me I wasn't home.

But instead emerged a new curiosity
Deeper than my imagination
Far above anything I'd ever planned.
My world fell together
A metaphor for the riverflow
With more grace than I could understand.

Ironically,
I still don't know the answer.
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April 29th, 2007 at 09:38pm
i liked it. It was really good!!
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
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April 30th, 2007 at 04:34am
I've re-read it over and over, because it really is an interesting piece of poetry. I feel so guilty that I haven't had time or inspiration to write something yet, but I'll have to think of something really beautiful to match this. Very Happy
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