Broken hearted

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bi_bu_ra
Rotting On Here
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Mibba
May 4th, 2007 at 01:28pm
Well, that's the first poem by me in months, I almost gave up on writing, but then I grabbed the pen again. This poem really doesn't sound like me, but I had to write down my feelings. Okay, here it is. Very Happy


I love you. You appear in the sky of hope like a tiny star,
blink to people below and soon you disappear.
There is no hope.
I love you. You move like a little wave in the ocean of
happiness, explode and disappear between other drops.
There is no happiness.
I love you. You echo like a silent voice coming from guitar of lust,
stop in the air, then the string of rashness settles down and a voice disapperars.
There is no lust.

I love you. You are my tiny star, little wave and a sound of guitar.
You make me feel precious, even if I have to watch you disappear in the fog.
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May 5th, 2007 at 03:12pm
wow
This is great
I love it. Great job
Don't ever stop writing again! I need to see more of your work!!
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