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PaNcAkEs
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PaNcAkEs
Age: 32
Gender: Female
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May 4th, 2007 at 02:37pm
this is the last time
i will fall to pieces
but not in front of you
well this time
i tried to be myself
but you felt left behind

you are much more
than anyone before
i thought you knew
how important you were
but now i see
how much pain you feel inside
and nothing seems alright

i am awake
but you're still alseep
i wish you'd see
how this has torn me apart
i know, i know
the thoughts in your head
you don't remember what i said

you are much more
than anyone before
i thought you knew
how imporant you were
but now i see
how much pain you feel inside

feel inside

you are much more
than anyone before
i thought you knew
how important were
but now i see
how much it hurts be you

are you torn or misplaced here?
or are you just alone?
are you broken or just feel hurt?
or was it just a vision?
are you someone else, but acting like you?
or was it just a little light?
Are you something better, than what they think of you?

you are much more
than anyone before
i thought you knew
how important you were
but now i see
how much it hurts to be you
how much it hurts to be you
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May 4th, 2007 at 11:47pm
this is great
I felt it. It was sorta emotioal....for me...well I;m sensitive so...yeah anyway

Great Job! You have talent!!!
PaNcAkEs
Jackass
PaNcAkEs
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1808

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May 5th, 2007 at 06:03am
Smile thank you so much! *hugs*
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May 5th, 2007 at 02:45pm
your welcome!!!
*hugs back*
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