Syncopated Symmetry

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Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
ros;
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 32
May 9th, 2007 at 05:08am
Harlequin horrors and midnight rendezvous.
She held her head in her hands while we
sat on the steps, alcohol flavoured perfume and
red-marred countenance.

“When you've reached the top
you'll see that it's a long way to fall.”

Her revelation morphed into the red hued darkness,
flashing yellow lights highlighting unimportant crevices
and capturing concrete bound tears.
The grime beneath my shoes become a thing of wonder,
an oddity that such insignificance exist in our
realm of heavy decisions and haunting regret.

Silence
deafens rumbling buses and impatient BMWs,
thickening the inky black of back streets.

If only I gave in to the urge to say:

Just when you think it is the end of the world,
you realize it is so much bigger than your own.
lyrical_mess
Falling In Love With The Board
lyrical_mess
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 5278

Mibba Blog
May 9th, 2007 at 10:49am
I already commented on INO, so I'll just say the same thing: It's amazing. I love the opening and this line:

"“When you've reached the top
you'll see that it's a long way to fall.”
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
May 10th, 2007 at 11:17am
You are such an incredible writer.

I bow down to you.
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