Sandwich-Masta
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 224 | May 12th, 2007 at 03:03pm Okay, before I type up this poem/song, I'd just like to say that this is only a bit of fun; that is, I don't really hate MCR. I haven't even heard any of their songs other than The Black Parade, so it would be pretty stupid if I did.
“The Black Parade Must DIE!!!”
Hanging out all alone, doing nothing at all
Everything’s fine, nothing’s wrong at all
But then I hear
That dreaded piano
From the radio
Oh no…
Please no…
Not again…
It’s here…
The Black Parade must DIE!
Gerard, I really DON’T care
About when you were a young boy
So shut up already, I’ve heard it a thousand times now
Does the word “overplayed” mean anything
To anybody at all-all
If it does
I’ve yet to see it show…
Oh yeah
The parade must die!
The parade must die!
I’m tired of hearing that same old frickin’ song
Every single time I dare
To listen to the radio for more than five seconds
The parade must die!
The parade must die!
You probably think I’m joking right now
But I’m deadly serious
If you don’t believe then look me in the eye…
It must DIE!!!
It must DIE!!!
It must DIE!!!
It must DIE!!!
(Note: this next part goes to the tune of the verses of “The Black Parade”)
Oh, the parade…
It must die now…
Because everyone, I mean EVERYONE is tired of
Hearing it every single day (every single day...)
Oh, parade…
Please shut up, now…
No offense to the MCR fans, but…
It still is overplayed (overplayed, overplayed, overplayed)
I’d hate
To have to resort to
Rather messy methods of getting this out of the way
So just humor me (humor me, humor me, humor me)
If you wish
To live to see the light of day
Then I’d suggest you obey my command right now-ow
Or you might have a little accident (if you know what I mean...)
It must DIE!!!
It must DIE!!!
It must DIE!!!
It must DIE!!!
That's it. Also, this is just tongue-in-cheek, really--I mean, I am irritated, but I'm not really THAT irritated, to the point where I'm going to make MCR have a little, ahem, *accident*. I think this might sort of be venting, but please comment. Constructive criticism is wanted...and, probably, needed. |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | May 14th, 2007 at 10:05pm *sigh* I'm trying not to take it offensively....
Okay. The flow was very choppy and was there supposed to be a rhyme pattern???
It was also very repettitive. I think you used MUST DIE too many times
I know that was the point, to say The Black Parade Must Die (i curse myself for saying that) but you can try to say it in different words. Be a little more descriptive.
Good try and keep writing. I know you'll get better!! 
BTW- My Chemical Romance is my favorite band...but don't worry. I'm ot too offended and I'm sure you mean it as a joke....do you 0_o
jk |
Sandwich-Masta
Geek
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 224 | May 17th, 2007 at 06:08pm Hey, somebody commented! Sweet!
I didn't wanna post it on Mibba, 'cos I knew there were a LOT of MCR fans there, so I posted it here.
The choppiness is partially because a lot of the rhythym of the song comes from how it's sung, but I guess you're right on that part.
Thanks for not flaming me despite your avid MCR fandom. |
Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | May 18th, 2007 at 04:22pm I think its cool, and true! but i have alot of friends that love MCR... i hate to insult them cause then theyll like lecture me and etc.
I think its overplayed but its still a good song! i dont think it should die... i just think it should R.I.P.
but its still awsome! |
icegirl.
Jackass
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 1890
 | January 27th, 2009 at 03:40am I don't think it's overplayed, infact, I never heard it on the radio when it was out. Oh and the btw, what you wanted happened. The Black Parade is Dead  |
GreenDaii
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Posts: 14 | January 18th, 2010 at 08:06pm Haha,I love MCR,but this is hilarious!! |
