Dead End Girl
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Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | June 27th, 2007 at 12:07am I've had the first verse floating around, as well as the chorus.
I really like this. It makes ME feel sad ._.
There's love to be made
But we just can't seem to stay awake
Their's somthing to be said
But just we can't seem to hear over this bed
You can call me later
Before you apoligise
You'll ask me how I'm feeling
And I'll think 'I'm pretty dead inside'
But I'll tell you 'I'm just fine'
I never knew how bad it was
Or maybe I just didn't want to see
Cause you make my heart beat faster
And you don't make it easy
You can call me later
Before you apoligise
You'll ask me how I'm feeling
And I'll think 'I'm pretty dead inside'
But I'll tell you 'I'm just fine'
I can walk into the sea
But I'd never wish me on your worst enemy
Cause if I meant everything I said
You'd be with me...
Yeah, you'd be with me.
You can call me later
Before you apoligise
You'll ask me how I'm feeling
And I'll think 'I'm pretty dead inside'
But I'll tell you 'I'm just fine' |
Jesse Lacey
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Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 23946
  | June 27th, 2007 at 12:12am OMG!
This is AMAZING, hun! :]
I really like how it all flows together, it almost made me cry, tbh.
 Got any other poems/songs? I'd love to hear more. |
