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Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | June 27th, 2007 at 04:19pm We're a family right?
so why does this feel so wrong?
We're in harmony right?
so why are we singing a different song?
Daddy where are you going?
Mommy loves you, I swear
Please don't leave daddy
Why don't you care?
I love you daddy
Why are you doing this?
It's so not right!
Please don't scream mommy
It's not worth the fight!
Daddy why are you screaming?
Daddy lower your voice
Stop this headache!
Yes you do have a choice!
What the hell is a family?
'Cause we sure aren't one
I guess this is the end then
Our "family" is done?
Mommy why did daddy have to leave?
Daddy didn't have to go
He'll be back right?
He loves us...doesn't he?
He'll come tonight!
"But daddy never came home
Where did he go mommy?
Where is he?
What happened?"
"Daddy Left"
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PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | June 29th, 2007 at 01:01pm mmhhmm....anyone? =[ |
Revenge;;
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 270
 | June 30th, 2007 at 02:14am Aww, thats sad..=[...
I like it though..=]..
Isn't this on INO too?..XD..
BrittxXx |
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Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | June 30th, 2007 at 12:21pm Thank you!! And Yeah it is on INO lmao
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Destination_Unknown
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 105 | July 2nd, 2007 at 04:27pm omg lindsey…
thats so sad…
but its wonderful!
i LOVE IT!
*claps* |
La Tua Cantante
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 171
 | July 2nd, 2007 at 07:06pm aw its really sad!!!!!
but (liek everyone else said too) its great
really nice rhyming pattern, and its really true in some families!
great job! |
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Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | July 4th, 2007 at 10:45am Thank you!!! |
