Watercooler Romance
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8 | July 12th, 2007 at 02:05am Dance with me, dance with me
Would you put your hand on my waist?
Wherever, as long as we dance
But wait,
Look into my eyes and tell me what you see
I see a pool of light blue. Swirling and swirling into a pit of love
Listen to my voice and tell me what you hear
I hear a soft, gentle breeze along the beach where the waves crash down
Hold my hand and tell me what you feel
Your hands are soft. Like silk. So fragile and delicate.
Is there something you would like to say to me?
Is there? What would I say?
Maybe I could show you. What If I kiss your lips
How many words would that prove to me?
Three. Three words will show you
Three words. What sort of meaning?
Lust. Imagination. You and Me
I can guess now.
The three words are I Love You Aren't they?
What took you so long?
Can you prove it to me just one more time. With one more kiss?
What will I proove to you?
Those words. That you really mean it.
I will, because I do mean it. I Love You |
PONED
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 257 | July 15th, 2007 at 06:37pm uh do I have to comment on this again?? lol
I have no problem doing this because it was amazing
Oh my, Mandi. This is great.
Look into my eyes and tell me what you see
I see a pool of light blue. Swirling and swirling into a pit of love
Listen to my voice and tell me what you hear
I hear a soft, gentle breeze along the beach where the waves crash down
Hold my hand and tell me what you feel
Your hands are soft. Like silk. So fragile and delicate.
Those parts were my favourites. The imagery was just...wow. I loved it.
And for the record, you don't suck
Great Job |
Watercooler Romance
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8 | July 17th, 2007 at 01:48am Thank you so much Lindsey dear <3
Anyone elase?? |
Watercooler Romance
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8 | July 31st, 2007 at 03:47am Anyone else?? =[
I'm not trying to spam, but I need some comments please |
