I'm A Disappointment.

So this is about me and what I've been going through lately, things are kinda weird with me and my boyfriend [long story] but I've been having a hard time dealing with it and I've been drinking lately.
Now, I know this poem isn't good at all but if you have suggestions please tell me! I want to improve this!


Air, stale with heat and cigarette smoke.
My own alcohol stained breath.
I don't remember if this was just a joke.
I'm a disappointment, nothing more, nothing less.

My emotions are running crazy,
Not much even matters,
My memory is hazy.
All I hear is my glass as it shatters.

I care so much about you,
You make me do all these crazy things,
I hope I get to see you soon,
Let's hear that angel sing...

I'm a disappointment, nothing more, nothing less.

Good Job

I liked it
It was deep

Very meaningful too