Now This...

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August 17th, 2007 at 08:19pm
The slashes on my wrist,
The blood all around me.
Stains in my jeans.

A little piece of paper,
Is sitting on my lap,
A carefully worded apology.

I'm distgusted with this place,
It seems as if everyone around me is leaving.
First the pain,
Now this.

I can feel blood in my hair,
I wonder how long I'll be here.

I'm scared,
I don't want this anymore,
I reach for the phone,
Dial 9-1-1.

By the time they arrive,
I had already gone,
Where to no one will ever know.

All they had to say was,

"Now this."
Awkward.
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Awkward.
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 10
August 17th, 2007 at 08:23pm
Damn woman.
This is not happy !!
You made some grammar mistakes
and this theme is common
But beside that , this is really good.
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August 17th, 2007 at 08:30pm
Yeah I know it's common
But last night I was bored and it was the only thing I could think of
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August 25th, 2007 at 11:35pm
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