Criminal Tears.

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Revenge;;
Geek
Revenge;;
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 270

Mibba
August 25th, 2007 at 04:30am
Um, I'm not sure if it'll really interpret well. Um,..just, please tell me what you think? Its really not my best...XD...

Criminal Tears.

Destinations so called home.
Its 1:11 at noon.
Lights making noises outside;
The hinges are becoming loose.

The suns everywhere in the fields.
Golden; swinging in the breeze,
While the sky cries.
The moon will show its face soon.

Mud splattering against the pavement;
Puddles in the streets;
Cars rushing by;
My umbrella can’t keep up.

Snap-shot of the hills over the horizon.
Rolling a river down to the roads.
Shall I drown?

Around the corner is my home.
My so called home.

I opened the door.
Thunder shatters; shacks the house.
Pain flowing through the flesh;
Another long fall down to the floor.

Roaring of pure evil from above me.
Pain after each wave comes forcing down.
Red blending in with tears;
Death is too far away.

Struggle becomes a game.
Running will leave it worse.
Crying is my only option.

These tears tonight,
From my eyes; from the sky.
It’ll never end.
Revenge;;
Geek
Revenge;;
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 270

Mibba
September 3rd, 2007 at 04:00am
Anyone?..=[..
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