Dead End Girl
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Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | August 28th, 2007 at 06:44pm A song about my ex-boyfriend.
I've been a little angry lately.
I dunno if I cane take it though. I may explode at some point :]
Whatever this is
It damn sure 'aint love
I'm falling off the edge
I know you never liked me much
So I'm crawling onto a ledge
Where your eyes can't touch
You've got your hands on me
Those hands all over me
And all I wanna do is crawl away
All I wanna do is claw away
Claw away from you
You've got a mind of my own
It's a hard thing to tolerate
I won't smile in your sadness
I won't wait for your wake
But I'll be glad in your happiness
To hide my hate
You've got your hands on me
Those hands all over me
And all I wanna do is crawl away
All I wanna do is claw away
Claw away from you
Get your hands away from me (x4)
You've got your hands on me
Those hands all over me
And all I wanna do is crawl away
All I wanna do is claw away
Claw away from you |
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Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 23 | August 29th, 2007 at 10:33am Too soft with the material that is situated for the meaning. I believe you're holding back. Gradually let the anger surface and suddenly become the fluent material.
Don't hold it in. Use it. ^^ |
